Dear Jacinda Ardern
Hello my name is Molly.
I would for you to consider my ideas about improving the terrible drowning toll in New Zealand. Just recently in January there has been 10 drownings.
I think that swimming lessons should be free. Say that swimming lessons were to expensive and your mum and dad needed that money for food and fuel. Then one day after years of saving money you went on a boat and you did't know how to swim and the boat sunk. Then that would be bad. Luckily my parents can afford swimming lessons but other people can't. I really think that you should think about that.
Sincerely - Molly
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