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Goldilocked up!
Breaking News
Baby bear wonders if he will
ever see his porridge again.
Is your house locked up? Have you seen anything strange lately?
Overview of the crime
Yesterday at 12:30 pm Goldilocks struck. She ate baby bear’s porridge and she broke the baby bear’s bed.
Goldilox has now set all the evil villains on a crime spree. The people of Fairytale city are outraged. They are saying that this is the worst crime in
centuries.
Community view
Here is what the family of bears had to say about this! “I think that this Disgraceful,
shameful and unacceptable. It has to stop this thief, robbery, breaking and entering,
trespassing, invasion and vandalism”. Well now you have heard what daddy bear had to say
about now lets see what mummy bear has to say. “My poor child, my poor husband, our
house was a mess, baby bear's porridge was all gone and the worst part was that
GOLDILOCKS sleeped in baby bear's bed”! Here is what baby bear had to say.
``I am very sad because my chair is broken and my nana gave it to me before she died and
I will never see my porridge again”.
Well that is what the bear family had to say about this. Let's see what the police have
to say about it. “We are not any closer to finding Goldilox so if you see any imposters or
any hipsters then call us immediately”!
Evidence
Here are the statistics: 75% of people have seen people lurking around, creeping around
and sneaking around. 30% of people are too scared to leave their house and their poor
porridge, 99% of people are getting a new high tech security system and 13% of people are
missing! Here is another update: there has been an average of 27% more crimes in the
hood!
The Upside
People are giving food and water to the bears because they are feeling sorry for the bear
family and they are so mad at Goldilocks for eating baby bear porridge. Baby bear will
have nightmares of Goldilox now. But on the good side if you want to donate to the bear
family either post it to fairytale city 123 big bad wolf road or call 0211 876 456 and the
news hub can give it to the bears on t-v.
Moving forward they have security guards all over the city trying to find Goldilox.
Her mother and father want her to come home to them. Her school teacher is shocked
that Goldilocks would do something like that because Goldielox was one of her best
students - always got A+- an exemplary student who never got in trouble.
This is very out of character and hopefully a one off.
advice
Next time you see a young little hipster lurking around, call the police immediately.
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