Hello and welcome back to my blog today I will be showing you my writing for this week. What we had to do was write about what happened after goldilocks and the 3 bears. Here is my writing I hope you like it. Goldilocks up!
Breaking News
Baby bear wonders if he will ever see his porridge again.
Is your house locked up? Have you seen anything strange lately?
Yesterday at 12:30 pm goldie Lox struck. She ate baby bear’s porridge and she broke the baby bear’s bed. Goldie Lox has now set all the evil villains on a crime spree. The people of Fairytale city are outraged. They are saying that this is the worst crime in centuries.
People feeling sorry for the bears saying they are going to starve and baby bears will have nightmares of Goldie Lox now.
Here is what the family of bears had to say about this! “I think that this Disgraceful, shameful and unacceptable. It has to stop this thief, robbery, breaking and entering, trespassing, invasion and vandalism”. Well now you have heard what daddy bear had to say about now lets see what mummy bear has to say. “My poor child, my poor husband, our house was a mess, baby bear's porridge was all gone and the worst part was that GOLDIE LOX sleeped in baby bear's bed”! Here is what baby bear had to say.”I am very sad because my chair is broken and my nana gave it to me before she died and I will never see my porridge again”.
Well that is what the bear family had to say about this. Let's see what the police have to say about it. “We are not any closer to finding Goldie Lox so if you see any imposters or any hipsters then call us immediately”!
Here are the statistics: 75% of people have seen people lurking around, creeping around and sneaking around. 30% of people are too scared to leave their house and their poor porridge, 99% of people are getting a new high tech security system and 13% of people are missing!
Here is another update: there has been an average of 27% more crimes in the hood! People are giving food and water to the bears because they are feeling sorry for the bear family and they are so mad at goldie lox for eating baby bear porridge. If you want to donate to the bear family either post it to fairytale city 123 big bad wolf road or call 0211 876 456 and the news hub can give it to the bears on t-v.
Moving forward they have security guards all over the city trying to find Goldie Lox. Her mother and father want her to come home to them. Her school teacher is shocked that Goldie Lox would do something like that because Goldie Lox was one of her best students - always got A+- an exemplary student who never got in trouble. This is very out of character and hopefully a one off.
Next time you see a young little hipster lurking around, call the police immediately.
Thank you for reading I hoped you liked it.
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